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5/1/2008 10:46:32Adequate (8 pts)—The essay responds to the assignment and addresses the topic, however, would be improved with more details and supporting examples.8Strong (12 pts)—The essay is well-structured with distinct introduction, body of essay, and conclusion. Paragraphs are well-ordered and transition from one to another.10Strong (12 pts)—The essay is nearly free of errors in terms of grammar, making sense, spelling, and punctuation. Demonstrates effort in revision process.10Adequate (8 pts.)—Sentence structure, word choice, fluency, and tone inconsistently contribute to the essay’s effectiveness.735