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. | Id | Haijin | Stanzas | Season | Kigo | Link | Theme:
Break apart/away | |
. | 1 | /vs | Glacier in the lake —
a splash is seen, before
it is heard. | Spring / Summer | Melting Glacier | To 6: Lake / Puddle | Chunk of ice | |
. | 2 | /vs | A breaking-up rumour started —
we just now find out. | No Season | n/a | To 1: Not heard immediately | Romance break-up | |
. | 3 | /vs | A tulip petal
falls to the floor — the baby
has a taste. | Spring | Tulip | To 2: Finding out | Petal coming free | |
. | 4 | /vs | Dark chocolate
between the lips — she bites
a little chunk. | No Season | n/a | To 3: Taste | Piece of chocolate | |
. | 5 | /vs | He releases the bowling ball...
the left pin wobbles, falls. | No Season | n/a | To 4: Dark (Chocolate / Ball) | Bowling pin | |
. | 6 | /vs | A wet cardboard box —
one kick almost sends a piece
across the puddle. | Spring | Puddle | To 5: Throw / Kick | Cardboard box kicked apart | |
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. | Technical Notes: | | | | | | | |
. | 1. A melting glacier is either a spring or summer season reference. | | | | | | | |
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