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. | Id | Haijin | Stanzas | Season | Kigo | Link | Theme 1: Conifers | Theme 1: Accumulations | |
. | 1 | /vs | Little beggar... squirreling away pine cones in our roof. | Autumn | Pine cones for the winter | To 6: Squirrel / Mouse | Pine | Pine cones | |
. | 2 | /vs | A layer of dark moss, on each cedar shake. | No Season | n/a | To 1: Roof | Cedar | Moss | |
. | 3 | /vs | Yellowing larch— the wind shakes more needles onto the ground. | Autumn | Yellowing needles | To 2: Shake | Larch | Needles | |
. | 4 | /vs | A seedling fir, nearly covered in leaves — forest clearing. | Autumn | Fallen leaves | To 3: Dying / New life | Fir | Leaves | |
. | 5 | /vs | Alpine meadow flowers... the added scent of juniper. | No Season | n/a | To 4: Clearing / Meadow | Juniper | Scent | |
. | 6 | /vs | A field mouse darts into the pile of spruce — mountain hut. | No Season | n/a | To 5: Alpine / Mountain | Spuce | Firewood | |
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. | Technical Notes: | | | | | | | | |
. | The first and last verses contain little animal references, both of which are unwelcome intruders. | | | | | | | | |
. | 1. "Little beggar" is a mild term of disdain for squirrels that persist in getting into the attic. | | | | | | | | |
. | 2. Cedar shakes are a type of shingle made from cedar. | | | | | | | | |
. | 4. Larch needles turn yellow and fall in the autumn, leaving the trees leafless through the winter. | | | | | | | | |
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